Shadows of Oblivion: Cerberus Test Illustration

I’ve been feeling like issue #3′s art of my book, Shadows of Oblivion, was lacking some of the grittiness that the series started with. So I did a test illustration to see if I could bring it back a bit.  What do you think?

If you want to read Shadows of Oblivion, I have 5 books in print which you can get here.

Any other suggestions are welcome!

And Keep Making Comics, not Excuses!