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Fresh from Comic con, i was inspired to do some drawing of my own creator owned Characters! So say hello to Cerberus, the leader of the Wolf Clan.

I'm working on really developing this style of very loose and rough line work. Preliminary feedback i've gotten says that it really suits my style, and it looks better than my tight line art, but i want to know what you think of it!

Let me hear the good the bad and the ugly!

If you want to see Cerberus in action check out the comic online at: [link]

Thanks for looking!!
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*cyimang Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That is a truly awesome picture my friend!:D

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MAY YOUR MISFORTUNES BE YOUR UPBRINGING... BUT THE
GOOD THAT SHINES UPON YOU, LET IT SHOW YOUR SUCCESS..

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*Shono Nov 28, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! This is one of my favorites!

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*cyimang Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome!
Mine too!:D

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I make an offering to the Porcelain gods every day, and sometimes every hour.

MAY YOUR MISFORTUNES BE YOUR UPBRINGING... BUT THE
GOOD THAT SHINES UPON YOU, LET IT SHOW YOUR SUCCESS..

The hardest thing we ever face.. Is the Boss on level Four..
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*Treyos Sep 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
The style definitely suits the mood of the comic, which was a pretty good read, btw. Lot of hostility and pain in it and the rougher lines add to the gritty feel.

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Check out my webcomic, Fatherhood! Laugh at the smart-assery, applaud the beatings I receive for it and marvel at how my wife hasn't outright killed me. [link]

Creating worlds, one word at a time.
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*Shono Sep 22, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Oh dude, you read my comic! thanks! Would you buy that issue if it was in print? Or buy future issues? I'm not Brian Bendis, or Geoff Johns, so I know i'm not the king of writers, but i think i have a good story here. But I always want to hear unbiased honest feedback, so you can always feel free to disagree, if it will result in me making better comics...

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*Treyos Sep 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
The story-telling was pretty good and you used an indirect method of filling in some of the back-story which is how I prefer to do it myself. A lot of people open their stories with a boatload of world history but it comes off like reading a textbook, which no one wants to do. Always best to weave it into the story and keep the focus on the present.

There was one or two places where the dialogue didn't flow too well - it didn't come off like something that real people would say - but for the most part it was solid.

I'm not sure how many pages it would actually work out to on paper. I like the flash format of having dialogue bubbles appear in sequence over the same artwork, but that wouldn't happen in print, so you'd lose a lot of frames there. Not sure the #0 really has enough to be a stand-alone issue. Do you know how many pages it would actually end up being? It's possible it wasn't as short as it seemed when I read through it. ;)

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Check out my webcomic, Fatherhood! Laugh at the smart-assery, applaud the beatings I receive for it and marvel at how my wife hasn't outright killed me. [link]

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*Shono Sep 24, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Its actually 11 pages long. Draw them all out on comic book pages then cut it up for the webcomic.

The print copy will be 28 pages long. 11 of the story you see online, 2 is a short back up story you'll only see in print, 13 pages of pin ups plus a preview page for next issue and a page where i can put in a sketch for you.


Thanks alot for the feedback I really appreciate it!

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*Treyos Sep 24, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
That's not too bad a book size, then. Have you already started work on the next issue?

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Check out my webcomic, Fatherhood! Laugh at the smart-assery, applaud the beatings I receive for it and marvel at how my wife hasn't outright killed me. [link]

Creating worlds, one word at a time.
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*Shono Sep 24, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Kinda. i have the story outline done. But i havn't writen any of the dialog or laid out the story visually yet. Paid work has to come first unfortunately haha

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*Treyos Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, those damned bill collectors aren't very patient, are they?

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Check out my webcomic, Fatherhood! Laugh at the smart-assery, applaud the beatings I receive for it and marvel at how my wife hasn't outright killed me. [link]

Creating worlds, one word at a time.
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